Thursday, November 20, 2014

"beware   :   do not read this poem" - Ishmael Reed


Ishmael Reed (1932-) is an American poet, playwright, novelist, and editor who is best known for his works satirizing American culture. He often tried to represent the perspective of neglected and oppressed African Americans, and the perspective of the neglected in general.

"beware   :   do not read this poem"


tonite   ,   thriller was
abt an old woman   ,   so vain she
surrounded herself w /
    many mirrors
it got so bad that finally she

locked herself indoors & her

whole life became the
    


mirrors

one day the villagers broke

into her house   ,   but she was too

swift for them   .   she disappeared
    


into a mirror
each tenant who bought the house
after that   ,   lost a loved one to

    the old woman in the mirror:

    first a little girl

    then a young woman

    then the young woman / s husband
the hunger of this poem is legendary

it has taken in many victims

back off from this poem

it has drawn in yr feet

back off from this poem

it has drawn in yr legs


back off from this poem

it is a greedy mirror

you are into this poem   .   from
    


the waist down
nobody can hear you can they   ?
this poem has had you up to here

    belch
this poem aint got no manners
you cant call out from this poem
relax now & go w /    this poem
move & roll on to this poem

do not resist this poem

this poem has your eyes

this poem has his head

this poem has his arms

this poem has his fingers

this poem has his fingertips

this poem is the reader & the

reader the poem


statistic   :   the US bureau of missing persons reports  
   that in 1968 over 100,000 people disappeared leaving no solid clues

                         nor trace     only
      a space        in the lives of their friends



This   poem seems to b  a  beast  ,  in it -/ self   . It relies mostly upon the structures of rhyme and stanza, or rather lack of, to portray itself as a primitive and deadly force with which to be reckoned. The first and second stanzas are fractal and broken in nature. The large amount of space between each punctuation mark and the next word breaks up the stanza and forces the reader to pause at each break and consider the idea of loss. In this way it causes uneasiness, mimicking the speech of a primitive beast trying to communicate. It also illustrates the panicked mindset of someone of someone who cannot think cohesively, having to confront the beast. The constant enjambment, in addition to works missing vowels (ex. “abt” for about), further distort the stanza, mimicking the incomplete thoughts a mindless monster would piece together in an attempt to form a full thought. Also, any mention of the mirrors or of anyone absorbed into one is indented. This slight shift represents the surreal and supernatural nature of the mirrors, signaling that total immersion in anything, including poetry, can cause an isolation depriving one’s self of the real world. When the poem does begin to organize lines in a standard fashion, it only issues warnings. The fact that these warnings are issued in relatively solid stanzas with almost no enjambment makes the message more cohesive and therefore stronger and more forceful, as if it has power over the reader. The repetition of multiple lines, such as “back off from this poem” and the alliteration present in the often repeated line “This poem has your [body part]” quicken the pace the reader reads at, increasing the urgency and panic felt. The final stanza form is entirely different from that of the rest of the poem, adding to the discord the poem displays. It names a statistic, mentioning that the disappearing people leave behind “only a space” such as the large pages breaking up the stanza. This mention of spaces relates back to the entire poem, and warns against self absorption as it can be a monster preventing one form participating in the human race, just as the mirrors and the poem suck in people.

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